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Comotown

by Tim Vierling
grade 2

 

The first ride I would go on

at Comotown would be the China dragon.

And it would go aster than a dog.

And then I would go on the bumper cars

I would go on the lion. The lion would be tan

and it if was real I would give it some meat!