Candy Man

Justice Wright
Grade 4
IDDS

One day a little girl goes to Candy Land with one of her friends.

The little girls name is Ruby and her friends name is Jessica.  They are very good friends.  So they go to Candy Land.  They go to Candy Land because they wanted to spend some allowance on some candy.  They wanted to have a candy party and invite their friends over and make the house look like candy.

 When they get there they see a man looking out the window of a candy house.  The man had a dark shadowy face, a small beard, red eyes, and brownish-grayish-blackish hair.  They noticed he was watching them.  They see a lot of candy flowers and a lot of candy plants.  They get very scared because that man was staring at them.  But they are so tempted to find out who that man is.  

He knew they were coming and he was ready for them.  How did he know they were coming?  Because he had been sneaking around them and their house.  The little girls did not know he had been spying on them.  They did not know he would sometimes go into their house and he would hid in their closet or under their bed.  Sometimes he stayed outside in the trees or bushes and spied on them. 

So they go in the house and they go up to the room that he was in but they didn't see him.  So then they get scared and look around the rest of the house.  They looked everywhere but the BASEMENT.  They don't see nothing through out the house.  They finally open the basement door, they go down the steps, before they reach the bottom of the steps the man jumps out and they scream then they run up the stairs and slam the door shut.  They start panicking.  They get really scared.  They take a couple breaths and wait a little bit.  Then when they were waiting the door opened a little bit.  They don't know why it happened.  They go up to the door and open it all the way.  Then they go down the steps But before they get down stairs the man jumps out and they scream but the man grabs them.  He takes them into this room. It looks just like a regular room, then he ties them to a chair and throws them in this huge closet but there is no bottom of the closet.  They fall to the basement.  Then they get out the ropes by using Ruby's pocket knife. They go through this little door all the way up to the top where the room was.  Then they ran out the house.  They ran all the way to their house.  They tell their parents.

Ruby says, "Mom and Dad, you don't believe what just happened to me!  When we went to candy Land and saw this man staring at us and he locked us in the basement, but we got out and ran all the way home."

"We didn't get no candy because we were so terrified and scared," Jessica said.  Then they just went to some stores around their neighborhood.  They never went back there again.