Andrew’s Adventure

By Andrew McAllen
Grade 5
IDDS

            One warm May morning a boy named Andrew who was 18 years old woke up because he heard a noise, so he got dressed.  Andrew went downstairs and no one was down there.  So Andrew went outside and hopped into his car but he forgot his keys.  Andrew went back inside and went into his room and grabbed his keys off his desk.  Then his cell phone rings.  Andrew picks up his phone and says “Hello.” 

A low voice says “Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha.  I will kill you.” 

Andrew hung up and went outside.  Andrew hopped into his Ferrari and put the keys into the ignition and drove two blocks and then stopped in front of a red house with black bricks, which was Aidan’s house.  Andrew went over to the door and knocked on it. 

A boy as tall as Andrew answered and he said, “Was’ up, Andrew.” 

Andrew replied “Come over to my house.”

“Wait,” said Aidan.  “I forgot Chimpy.”  Aidan ran inside his house and one minute later, Aidan came out with his pet monkey named Chimpy. 

Andrew and Aidan both hopped into Andrew’s Ferrari.  Chimpy also hopped into the Ferrari. 

Andrew drove to his house and said, “Let’s go in.” 

Andrew sat down and said, “Come sit down.”  Aidan sat down next to Andrew.  Andrew said, “What do you wanna do?” 

Aidan said “Go to the store.” 

Andrew said, “Let’s go. “ 

They ran out of the house and got into the car.  Andrew drove to the store with Aidan.  They parked the car and went to the store.  In the store there were aisles of stuff.  Andrew said, “What do you want?” 

Aidan said “Skittles.” 

Andrew says  “I want Twix.” 

They grabbed the candy and went to the counter.  The cashier scans the candy and says, “Two dollars” 

Andrew pulls out his wallet and hands the cashier a five dollar bill.  The cashier gives Andrew three dollars back. 

Andrew and Aidan both go out of the store and open the car door and sit down, then close the doors.  Andrew put his car key into the ignition.  Andrew drives back to Aidan’s house and Aidan and Chimpy got out of the Ferrari and Aidan said, “Bye, see you later.” 

Andrew drove off towards his house.  Andrew got to his house and hopped out and locked his car.  Andrew went inside his house and opened the fridge.  He saw some chicken.  Andrew pulled out the bag of chicken and set it on the table.  Then Andrew opened the pantry and pulled out some BBQ sauce.  Andrew opened the bag of chicken and then opened the package of BBQ sauce and poured the BBQ sauce into the chicken bag and then shook up the bag. But when Andrew opened the chicken bag, most of the BBQ sauce was on the bag, not the chicken.  So Andrew threw it away.

 Andrew’s cell phone rang.  It was Aidan, so Andrew answered the phone.

Aidan was screaming into the phone, “Help me please.” 

Andrew grabbed his keys and ran outside to his Ferrari and Andrew jumped into the car and drove to Aidan’s house.  Andrew ran to the door and knocked, then Andrew opened the door and right when Andrew stepped onto the carpet a metal sledgehammer hit Andrew in the face.  Andrew hit the ground unconscious. 

When Andrew woke up he saw that he wasn’t at Aidan’s house anymore.  Andrew realized that he was in a cage with Aidan right next to him.  Andrew walked over to Aidan and Andrew said, “Aidan get up.” 

So Andrew screamed “Come on Aidan, get up.” 

Aidan opened his eyes and said “Where am I?”

Andrew said, “We are in a cage of some sort.” 

Aidan said “What?” and he got up. 

Then a man with a red bandana over his eyes with back and blue clothing and  black and red boots came over pulled out a sword and cut the lock off of the cage.     Andrew and Aidan walked out of the cage. 

Andrew said “What is your name?” 

He said “My name is Kenchi.  I am an assassin.” 

“Cool.” Said Andrew. 

“What are your names” said Kenchi. 

“I’m Andrew and this is Aidan.” 

“We have to leave now” said Kenchi.

  Andrew, Aidan and Kenchi left the cage area.  They walked into a room with trolls with big hammers were everywhere. 

Kenchi pulled out his sword and teleported to the other side of the crowd of trolls.  Kenchi then teleported Andrew and Aidan where he was. 

Then Andrew and Aidan ran out of the building. 

But then Andrew, Aidan and Kenchi could feel their powers and life being sucked out of them by Deagon.