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Water

by Ricky Borash

When I drove the boat

everything happened

so fast.  First I turned

then almost (splash)

my brother almost in water, water always blue

my mom touching water

then i turned back

I didn't know what

really happened

it was fun then

bad then fun then

bad.  I got in 

trouble.  I thought

nothing really happened.