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Portland

By Naomi

When we first got there, we were going swimming.

Then I went in the tornado—it is a whirlpool

You go around really fast

And you get dizzy—its kind of like

you’re drowning,

it is hard to get out.

Then I went on the slide

It was huge, it feels like your falling

Down and I splash inside the pool.