Story

By Andy Thao
4^th grade
Highland Park Elementary School

One Wish (part1)

  If you had   wish, what would it be?  Me, I would buy my mom a house. Well anyway, there once was a boy his name was Andrew. He was really poor. He said if I had one wish I would be more like others. Because he was very poor sometimes he had to wear the same thing to school. One

day he came from school he didn’t see his mom and dad. The next door neighbors said they past away. Andrew said your just kidding right they said I’m sorry but it’s true. Andrew really wanted a wish right now. That day he got sent to a foster home. That night he cried and cried then he saw a shooting star. He wishes that he got adopted. Then the next day he really got adopted. But do the person who adopted him really like him?

One Wish (part2)

The person who adopted him was Nancy . Nancy has brown dark eyes. Her hair is very pretty. But do not be fool by what you see. The first day she adopted Andrew she was very nice. But after a couple weeks she started treating Andrew like a slave. Andrew knows why she adopted him.  The reason was that she just wanted money from the foster home. Her plan was to use all the money then take Andrew back to the foster home. Andrew heard her plan he was very upset because he thought if he did all the things for her she might treat him better not like crap still. But she still not treats him good at all. That night he was crying again and it got worst then ever!!!  Then he saw an angel it was bright as a lamp. The angel said why you are crying Andrew. He said because I wish for some body to adopt me for a better life not make it worst. Then I will give you one more wish. This time is going to be better but when you make the wish say why you want it. Then there was a POOF the angel did not know what he wish for but she said it better be good.

One Wish (part 3)

My wish was to be the riches Man on earth! I went out side for a walk. But why do every one hate me? Is it because of me or is it because I’m so rich. May be it’s because I’m greedy HO NO!!!! What am I going to do, what am I going to do!  Wait a minute why are there Romans why on

Earth am I wearing a crown?  Please don’t tell me I went back in time.  Okay, calm down, Andrew, just clam down.  Okay.  Why am I talking to myself?  Okay, where’s the angel!  Sorry if I broke your screen story reading thingeamujagu.  But I said I’m sorry, so get over it.  Oh, and I will try too not scream so loud.  Okay, now where was I?  Oh yeah…where’s the angel?

To be continued…