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Oh Cake

by Rachel

Creamy on the sides

lemon in the middle

Pudding on top.

Oh cake, I can't stand it any

longer.  My stomach is growling.

And I am so hungry.  Oh cake, why 

can't I eat it right now.

I wish that I can eat the 

whole cake. Oh cake you smell 

so good and tasty.