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The Gym

by Quincy

 

Once I walk in the gym, right 

away you can hear the balls pounding

you can hear the pounding on the backboard.

You can hear the advice from the parents.

At 6:30 we start, can feel the breeze pass them

sometime we play a scrimmage

the score goes up fast

I think half way through

we scored 20 points.  After 

you can see lots of sweat 

on the floor.